Sleeping Valor

I am sorry to say this, but i am very dissapointed in you... jk! :wink: But I must insist on more description. *demanding little person* I have no idea how ...

Interesting. The plot is definitely good and I like the whole Atlantean vs. Murchalls concept. Besides little mistakes I know must be in there somewhere, there are only a few ...

I was going to quote just the parts I liked the most, and then I realised I was actually quoting the whole thing. I loved it. It's perfect, don't change ...

I also don't usually like fighting stories, it's always hard to visualize the fight since often there isn't enough description. You, on the other hand, did a wonderful job describing ...

I loved it! Even though there aren't many words, the emotion comes across really well. From the very beginning I got the feeling of slowly falling as the poem progressed. ...